In a world . . .
Well, it’s not really a world, is it?
In the space between worlds . . .
That’s redundant, not very descriptive, and probably not related to what you want to say.
*sigh* On a ship traveling from its homeworld . . .
Hmm. Not enough detail, I think. Could you maybe add some specifics?
The spaceship Thetis leads an escadrille out of New Alexandria on spring maneuvers–
Maybe not that specific.
In an electronic communication medium, a disembodied voice gives up and heads out for an early weekend.
Oh, sure, give up. Come on, you were almost there. One more try. . . pretty please?
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